The steps to the car can't be that
Far. The excitement rushing through my body
is unexplainable;
I am free from the distraction of school
School.
The word brings back memories of work which makes
me sad.
I wake up the next morning to the sun creeping
through the windows of my brothers room along with
my friends already ready to take a swim.
The first dive of the summer.
The sun was sparkling like a gem on the rim of gleaming
clear blue warm waters.
Tanning and just thinking about what this summer will bring,
memories that I will cherish forever and ever.
Ready for summertime to begin.
I like your form of word style in your poem. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHey Audrey, I really like this post because I think that anybody could relate to it. Everybody loves tanning, swimming, etc.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Great poem, and I like the picture.
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