Research Paper Feedback Post: 2/2/14

   I feel like my research paper is going to be very well thought out and detailed in the final. I have all these ideas in my head ready to put down on a paper. I have put down most of them, but I feel like when I am writing my paper I sometimes go a little overboard with ideas and then just get lost in my head with a bunch of jumbled words. Other than that, I feel like my introduction paragraph is very strong, and I have very reliable and detailed sources that contribute to my paper a lot. Getting started was very difficult for me. Learning how I should start my paper, watching videos on drafting, and reading other example papers was definitely a weakness for me because I took most of my time just learning how I should even start.
   One thing that I am unsure about is how I should end my paper. The conclusion paragraph always seems to be the most difficult because you have already said and stated everything about your topic, so there isn't much left to explain. I would like help on citing correctly in my paragraphs. I understand the concept but I feel like I am missing something. Also, I would like help with my sentence structure. Again, I get lost in my head of bunched up words, and sometimes my sentences don't make sense. You will notice this when reading my paper. You will also notice that my quoting structure may be a little off. When reading and looking over my paper, you should focus on the tone and sound of my paper. I want my paper to be interesting, but I feel like it isn't the correct tone.