Reading Response 9/9/13

         I am starting to get confused with Insurgent. I was reading it in study hall today, when I came across a confusing argument between Four and Tris'. I am starting to get sidetracked with my reading. Whenever I read, I find myself drifting off to different thoughts. If anyone has read Insurgent, or is currently reading it, please come find me to talk about it and discuss the events happening in it. I havent been reading my other book "Getting Revenge On Lauren Wood" this week.
         My literacy narrative is coming along strong. I love my topic because it was such a great moment of my life. I am so excited for my class to read it because I hope they are as excited as I was. I think that they will feel the energy that is in my words. The only thing I am struggling with is sentence structure. I feel like I have so much to say, and I put it all in one sentence, so it sounds confusing and messed up. Does anybody else have this issue? Another thing I am struggling with is paragraph organization. Is anyone else having this problem?

Reading 9/9/13:

Literacy narrative~ 100 minutes
Insurgent~ 30 minutes